The sun was warm, and the figure felt the comforting warmth of the sun’s rays as they shone down from the sky.
It looked like the weather was about to change suddenly as the clouds gathered above the distant peaks of the mountain range.
To be caught in the chaos of a mighty storm is not a pleasant experience. The lone figure’s slow walk became a run; if he didn’t find safety soon who knew what might happen…"
Can you describe what might happen next?
This is what I wrote:
He ran to the fence and jumped in the tree before the lightning struck. Before he knew it started hailing stones. He got really hurt but he got through all the pain. The man then saw that a blizzard was coming and blew him away.
The man was found no longer in a blizzard but in a farm with chickens. The man met a woman who took care of him for the whole day, but little did they know the storm was right on top of them luckily they were under shelter. The roof then ripped off like a vicious dinosaur. They ran in the house and the storm stopped. The man then left and took care of himself. They said their goodbyes and hoped they would meet again.
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